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Lucy

It was time for bed. Mum put lucy in a humongous box and when I was asleep  mum got my favorite teddy dog and put it in with lucy. Lucy is our brand new puppy. In the morning me tavish and lachlan got up to watch tv and found lucy sleeping on the couch. We turned the light on and found poop every wear tavish got a plastic bag and picked it all up. Tavish put the plastic bag that was full of poop and put it in the bin. When mum got up we told her and she went got lucy a dog kennel and lucy never pooped in the house again.lucy looks a bit like a dalmatian. She is berzoff. She LOVES going on walks and playing with other dogs.